Date: 12/26/2010

piece #1

I've always said that it's fine like this, You and I, so far away, And I have convinced myself, No, I'm not missing you. But they say I'm not a great liar, Coz you're all I'm really thinking of, So let me tell you. (Chorus) Hey I miss your smile, You brighten up my day, I miss your touch, It makes me feel perfectly safe, And I can't hide it anymore, It's getting too complicated, I gotta tell you now. That I think you're cruel like that, When you're passing by, Holding hands with another girl, Like she means the world to you. But they say you're not a great liar either, Coz it's me you're always thinking of, So let me tell you. (Repeat chorus) (Bridge) That hey, we could've been so much more, We could've been perfect, But life got in the way, And now that we're here, Will you tell me? -- this is my first attempt at literature. tell me how i did please? constructive criticism?


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